Writing:// Boy meets Girl Exercise 1/08/0009

Wherein our hero, BA Boucher, attempts to discover what a man raised among men would say about the first woman ever seen, and ultimately fails

Hello again. Critique Circle is the best place on the web that I've found that keeps up the writing muscle. What with the forums, exercises, and critiquing. Here's another episode of CC exercises.

For whatever reason, somebody has grown to adulthood living entirely among members of their own gender. They have never spoken to or seen a member of the opposite gender, or even learned that another gender existed. Unexpectedly, they meet someone from the opposite gender.

Writer: Cookiemobs

"Hey Rob!"

"What Johnny?" He said this through teary eyes.

"That dude with the chest tumors didn't think my fart was funny!"

"What the hell?"

"I don't know what that means, but let's beat it to death with a claw hammer."

"Hells yeah, after that let's drink beer!"

Yep, spend a hell of a lot of time with that one.

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